I continue to expand and refine my Kaiju story and I can see a noticeable improvement from the original. There have been new chapters that further elaborated the story and unexpected twists and turns that will make the plot more engaging. I also included more action with my Kaiju in it without going too far. Overall, this is becoming a much more tightly knit story than it was before. Also, I am thinking of making more stories that include my characters and Kaiju. This is only the beginning of a new series.